Describing an incident

A group of students describe an incident. In the first instance a poor description is given - a girl trying to describe how a friend’s father nearly missed a train, wanders off into irrelevant detail and fails to capture interest. Another girl, describing the same incident, creates interest with an ordered and well-presented account.

Credits

David A. Smart (producer); Dora V. Smith

Complete catalog record
Presents a poor description of an incident in contrast to a description of the same incident that is complete, interesting and colorful., DESCRIBING AN INCIDENT. Coronet, c1949. 9 min., sd., b&w, 16mm. Summary: A demonstration of four points to consider in describing an incident: an opening that creates interest; complete descriptions, without unnecessary details; orderly arrangement of events; and a strong climax. Credits: Educational collaborator, Dora V. Smith. © David A. Smart; 14Jun49; MP4228., DESCRIBING AN INCIDENT. Coronet, c1949. 9 min., sd., b&w, 16mm. Summary: A demonstration of four points to consider in describing an incident: an opening that creates interest; complete descriptions, without unnecessary details; orderly arrangement of events; and a strong climax. Credits: Educational collaborator, Dora V. Smith. © David A. Smart; 14Jun49; MP4228.NOTE: Two (or more) records have been merged together to create this data.

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Sources

  1. Wikipedia — List of Coronet Films — title, year, creator, length, color, credits, video
  2. 16mm Filmography editors — creator, format, sound, genre, description, catalog record